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i feel like giving you an honest review full of helpful, constructive criticism. This was pretty good, but there's a lot of room for improvement.

The best parts, by a long way, were the slow shots of the environments/space, and the banter between the characters. Despite only adequate acting, they seemed pretty good together. The effects in the space scenes were actually pretty realistic, thoubh a bit TOO realistic in contrast with the fighting effects, which gives a jarring feeling like different parts were made in cmpletely different ways, it's inconsistent.

Unfortunately, some parts leave a lot to be desired. The combat for instance, seemed to be the worst parts of dbz and power rangers, melded together into a trite mess of transformations, powerup sequences, and overly elaborate energy attacks that noone thiks to interrupt, or avoid. it's pretty unconvincing as anything but a poorly choreographed fireworks show, although there's no doubt it will (and does) appeal to the young male teen audience that likes that sort of thing.

The character art was pretty neat, though simple at times. it appears to be done framebtyframe which is pretty good for a smooth animation effect, but it does cause a necessary drop in detail that contrasts oddly with the lush environments. A bit of extra thought on motion and anatomy would help you out too.

overall though, pretty decent!

your writing is better than ever i loved that ^^ the voices just top it off too.

your art could do with some improvement though. maybe work with an artist to produce awesome stuff between you ?

Interesting.
Quite fun, and i loved the idea ^^ A truly original way to make stuff. Unfortunately i feel the concept was dragged down somewhat by the quality of the resulting animations. Before Jeinu's one i had a pretty low opinion of things. some of these animations clearly had more effort than the others (props to the iphone one!)

I did it! on the 9th day! the time limit was a great way of adding tension i think, neat work ^^

well that was wierd. it just ended, no conclusion. why would you do that ?

no reason, rhyme or sense to things, no point. it was intribuing but i was hoping there would be some way to affect things.

i'm pretty sure the music is a 10 second loop. and it's the worst, tinniest, most grating loop ive ever heard ;-;

visuals are terrible, interface is nonexistent, everything runs like treacle. its just awful

thanks to the comments :p

i just heard this in a random flash and i knew it ws familiar. I couldn't place it though. i searched the "heard in" list and found nothing familiar. then i saw these comments.

yep, definitely hon shop. You say they've used the same loop? is this some public domain work? what's your source. You really should address that in the description or you're going to get accused of stealing quite a lot.